求英语高手帮忙找下这篇作文的错误,包括单词拼写,语法,结构,只要是错误就行Asweallknow,womenaretotallydifferentfrommeninmanyways,suchasthebody,faceandwaysofdoingthings.Womenaremoresensitivewhilemen

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求英语高手帮忙找下这篇作文的错误,包括单词拼写,语法,结构,只要是错误就行
As we all know,women are totally different from men in many ways,such as the body,face and ways of doing things.
Women are more sensitive while men seem more reasonable.We often find that women are more active when they fall in love,but the men always try to keep their own way of life.
A lot of women think that the family is the most important,such as the Japanese,Korean,even some western people.But,in my opinion,most men think that the career is most important.So they may spend more time on job than at home.
Women are more attentive in many ways and men have more strength.So we may find that there are few female sailor and also few male nurses.
In a word,women are very different from men.

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第三段,the family the career ,都把the 去掉,
第四段,female sailor sailor 应该加S