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请帮我看下我写的这句话有错么I feel my heart speeds up,when I hear her namefrom my old friends.

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请帮我看下我写的这句话有错么
I feel my heart speeds up,when I hear her namefrom my old friends.
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您的原句从语法方面来说没错,但从英语习惯上来说有以下几点建议,供参考:
因为是听到了她的名字后心才跳得快,所以用过去时态比较适合
heart speeds up 改为 heart beat speeds up (心跳加快)
from 改为 mentioned by 提到


I felt my heart beat speeded up when I heard her name mentioned by my old friends.