求一篇四级关于低碳生活的作文,

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求一篇四级关于低碳生活的作文,

Answer 1

Have you got low carbon today?
A saying goes that “there’s only one mother earth’’.At present,more pollution has come into existence and our mother earth has become weaker and weaker.One source of the pollution is the over-releasing of carbon dioxide.
As is known to all,too much carbon dioxide has caused the climate changes.Somewhere in the world,people are suffering from storms resulting from so much carbon dioxide given off.Moreover,the over releasing of carbon dioxide may result in less rainfall,the global warming and so on.Day by day and year by year,what will our planet be like?
So,wake up to live a low-carbon life to protect our planet.Never are you allowed to say “NO” before you try it.Should it be convenient,try walking or cycling instead of driving.What’s more,turn off the lights when they are not in use.Take every little thing into account that can reduce the output of carbon dioxide.Easy as it might be,it can really make an unbelievable difference.Hey,have you got low carbon today?
The teacher’s comment:The structure of the article is very well put,and she can use many beautiful sentence patterns including the inverted order,the subjunctive mood and she can very well use some newly-learned phrases,like take…into account,result in and so on.And in her writing,you can easily find the conjunctions,which many students find hard to use.