短文改错,为什么错高中英语短文改错,10个,大小写不算,ioftenquarrelaboutmymotheroverwhethericanwatchtvafterschool.sheholdsviewthatseniorthreestudentshavetomakefullyuseofeveryminutetoworkhardattheirl

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短文改错,为什么错
高中英语短文改错,10个,大小写不算,
i often quarrel about my mother over whether i can watch tv after school .she holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons .it seems to me that once i am allowed to do that ,i'll unable to control myself and forget all about my study .she also thinks it is bad for my eye .but i really can't accept her ideas .in my opinion ,watch tv can set my mind at rest after a day's hard works .besides ,it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad .thus ,we shouldn 't be forbidden to watch tv .要详细理由,

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1.about 改成with 与...某人争论 2.view 前面加 the 3.fully 改成full make full use of 充分利用...
4.i 和 am 调换位置...once 是状语 状语提前 需要半倒装 5.eye 改成eyes 双眼 6.ideas 改成idea 它是不可数名词.7.watch 改成watching watching tv 作句子主语.8.works 改成works work在句子中为不可数.9.had 改成、have 句子中 应该是国内国外所发生的事情,不应该用过去完成时,而是现在完成时态,因为是过去到现在看电视时发生的事情,而不是过去到过去发生的事情.10.unable 前加be 应该是 i will be unable to unble 是形容词 前面要加系动词.