英语翻译My Favourite FestivalChina has a lot of festivals.My favourite festival is the spring festival.Because the spring festival is the beginning of a year.And the new year's Eve we can try our best to play.Do you like playing?I think everybody

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英语翻译
My Favourite Festival
China has a lot of festivals.My favourite festival is the spring festival.Because the spring festival is the beginning of a year.And the new year's Eve we can try our best to play.Do you like playing?I think everybody likes playing.We can play happily.On the New year's Eve,we can eat aa lot of delicious food.We can get a lot of red packets from realitives.A good beginning is the most important for a year.I like the spring festival.How about you?

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我最喜爱的节日
中国节日的种类真可谓五彩缤纷.我最喜爱的节日是春节,因为春节是一年的开端.在除夕夜,我们可以尽情的玩耍,有谁不喜欢玩呢?我想爱玩之心人皆有之.而且,我们可以在除夕夜尽享美味,也可以拿红包发笔小财.一年之计在于春.我爱春节,你呢?
原文有几处问题：
1. And the new year's Eve we can try our best to play.Do you like playing? 中the前面需加on
2. 个人认为 We can play happily.这句话多余.