这段英文怎么翻译?写的精准吗?Built by my company carrying 3,500 tons of asphalt boat will be December 17, 2009 held at the commencement ceremony.We cordially invite the leaders of your company to join us at the Opening, and to grace us an

Question

这段英文怎么翻译?写的精准吗?
Built by my company carrying 3,500 tons of asphalt boat will be December 17, 2009 held at the commencement ceremony.
We cordially invite the leaders of your company to join us at the Opening, and to grace us and honor us for this occasion.
We look for to your participation. Thank you
有没有语病啊?
我自己写的想问问是不是通顺.
帮忙纠错啊.
我公司建造的3500DWT沥青船定于2009年12月17日举行开工仪式，诚邀贵社领导参加。 期待您们的光临
这是原文
看看能不能精准的翻译一下啊

Answer 1

Our 3500 tons asphalt boat will be commencing production on [Dec 17 2009] and we should like to cordially invite [the leaders of your company] to be present at a celebration to grace us and mark the occasion.
Please confirm that you will be able to attend by advising us of your time —— we can arrange for you to be met.All arrangements for your stay [overnight on Dec 16 2009] will,of course,be made by us at our expense.
Yours faithfully,