cavilComplainaboutsomethingUsually,wearen’tunsatisfiedwithrules,requirements,opinionsandsoon,butwehavetocomplywiththemoracceptthem.Asaresult,weaccumulateintheheartsofalotofcomplaininganddiscontentment.Weneedtorel

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Complain about something
Usually,we aren’t unsatisfied with rules,requirements,opinions and so on,but we have to comply with them or accept them.As a result,we accumulate in the hearts of a lot of complaining and discontentment.We need to release them,otherwise our life will lose happiness.
However,when I ask myself what I need to complain,I do not know how to answer it.Owing to there are too many,but very trivial.After a moment,I think out a most important one to me that is study.According to others’ words,study in university is easy.Whereas the fact is not as imagined and the reality is cruel.Too many examinations need to go through; too many certificates need to gain .CET4,CET6,CEM4,CEM8 and some others ,in short a lot of.In my opinion,to me,It was a long and difficult road.Moreover ,my English foundation is weak.Sometimes I feel tired and missing and complain why pay so much,but so little return.My roommates can get higher score than me,nevertheless they pay few.So I will complain myself so useless and the reality is unfair.Time is a good medicine.After a period of time,complain will disappeared.But there is a new one.
In fact,a lot of complaining existed,from life to study,from home to school.Our range of complaining from our dormitory is too small and food of canteen is tasteless,to teacher is strict and school rules so many.All in all,there are still complain,but life continues.We still have to make effects to live and make wonderful life.

Answer 1

Usually,we aren’t unsatisfied with rules,requirements,opinions and so on,but we have to comply with them or accept them
这句话可以改成：Most of time,although we are not satisfied with the rules,requirements,opinions and so on,we still have to go with them.因为comply with them or accept them 有点概念不清造成了错误,应该找一个能搭配双方的词组,如go with.
As a result,we accumulate in the hearts of a lot of complaining and discontentment.这句话改为As a result,lots of complainings and discontentments are accumulated in our hearts.因为前种说法不适用于英语.
However,when I ask myself what I need to complain,I do not know how to answer it.应该为However,when I ask myself what I really have to complain about,I have no idea about it.
Owing to there are too many,but very trivial.改正：Because there are too many to complain about ,however ,they are too trivial.Owing to 的用法完全错误.
说真的,你的作文比较乱呢,也读不懂你所要表达的意思.注意不要乱用自己没有把握的词语哦.就先改这么多吧,你自己看看