求一篇差不多的英语作文,

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求一篇差不多的英语作文,
 

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In recent years,campus music has been commercialized gradually.The enterprises are encouraging and supporting student musical festvals and musical competitions of student singers,because they think it's a good chance for them to push these student singers to the market.
Some enterprises are paying attention to the campus music because the students are dedicated to their collage community,they are creating a positive outlook for the school.Nowadays,entertainment marketing are getting popular,and more teenagers are interested in the media field.Enterprises are willing to give the chance for college student as they are the attention of the society.Furthermore,it's also a good chance for the students to show their talents to the public audiences.More importantly,the campus music is able to spread the message of create a better world and giving hints about healthy and positive living styles.However,the competition might cause some problems between students,they may put too much effort on the music rather then school works.
In conclusion,it is great for the enterprises to publish the college student musical events,but to be a student,we should be clear of what we are expecting for our own future job.
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