Comparetheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthreeifthefollowingasmediaforcommunicatinginformation.statewhichyouconsidertobethemosteffective.comics,books,radio,television,film,theatre.Nowadays,inourdailylifetherearemanyvariousm

Question

Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three if the following as media for communicating information.state which you consider to be the most effective.
comics,books,radio,television,film,theatre.
Nowadays,in our daily life there are many various media for communicating information,especially for books,radio and television.I think television is the most effective media for transmitting information in the three media.
Firstly,I would like to talk about the advantages of books,radio and television.Books are the easiest one to accept,according to pictures and words on the book which is much simple for most of readers.Also,radio is considered as the most direct way to get new things.As we all know,radio is based on the voice,when we hear it,we get it.luckily,we have television which put the advantages of books and radio together.New things could be spreaded even more faster.
Secondly,I would like to talk about disadvantages of the three media as above.Books are made of paper which means it wastes resources of trees.And in spite radio is relay on the waves in the air,sometimes it is not easy to get signal when you are far from the center of city.Television is neither for paper nor for waves,however,it needs box or lines for it which is very complicated,additionally,watching television longer is not good for health.
Finally in conclusion,three media which are books,radio and television have advantages and disadvantages.Although television has disadvantages,I think television is most effective in the three media,because it is in a closer vision and much easier to get signal for the information.
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