帮我 改一下英语作文,如果有错误的话就写出来 MY HOBBY my hobby is playing computer games andcollecting toys.I usually plays computer games in the night.The computer games are very fun.I play the well.I usually collects toys on Satur

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帮我 改一下英语作文,如果有错误的话就写出来 MY HOBBY my hobby is playing computer games and
collecting toys.I usually plays computer games in the night.The computer games are very fun.I play the well.I usually collects toys on Saturday or sunday.Ihave got some toycars and toyplanes from America.they are very beautiful.what are you hobby?
那句是I play computer games very well。加我qq吧 1404103567

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首先,第一句不正确.从你的表述来看,你的爱好有两个,playing computer games and collecting toys,主语谓语应该保持人称和数的一致,改成：My hobbies are playing computer games and collecting toys.这里有一个现成的例句：My hobbies are letter writing,football,music,photography,and tennis.我的业余爱好是写信、踢足球、听音乐、玩摄影和打网球.
I usually plays computer games in the night.I 是第一人称,play不用加s,只有第三人称单数才需要加.
I play the well.
what are you hobby?这里hobby既然是单数,前面的系动词也用单数形式,is就可以了.