帮我改正下语法错误什么的...A:Where would you like to go on vacation?B:I want to go somewhere warm帮我改正下语法错误什么的...A:Where would you like to go on vacation?B:I want to go somewhere warm.How about you?A:I'd like to vis

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帮我改正下语法错误什么的...A:Where would you like to go on vacation?B:I want to go somewhere warm
帮我改正下语法错误什么的...
A:Where would you like to go on vacation?
B:I want to go somewhere warm.How about you?
A:I'd like to visit Xia Men.
B:Could you tell me more about the city?
A:Sure.It's a famous tourist city with long history.
B:Oh.great!And what's your hope?
A:I hope to meet a famous peason.I think it's cool.
B:I don't think so.I want to be a policeman.
A:It's a great dream.But i think as a policeman is dangerous.
B:Yes.It's a little dangrous.
A:Bye
B:Bye

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Dear LiMing,Thanks for coming.
I have come to understand you want to find a warm,interesting place,and you can swim at anytime.
There is a wonderful place in sydney where the money spend is quite low.
When the winter vacation comes in China ,Sydeny turns into summer .Sydeny is located at the seaside of Asturalia.Tt's very cool and it's do the right place to travel,I think you would like it.
Sydeny Hotel stands here.The rooms are very comfortable ,especially a swimming pool in every room,Though it's small!The light shine brightly.Very beautiful!
Believe me ,I am sure you will be pleased with the place.Just 4500 dollars.
Are you satisfied with the place?
If you have any question,You can make a telephone to 7123456.
thank you for you invetion!
坦白说,里面可能稍微有错误,我也是大胆尝试的!