英语翻译（中文是想要表达的意思,翻译不必和中文完全一样）中文部分：因为Nancy的行为明显是违法的,所以我认为她还是惧怕法律的.她并没有想到我真的会去寻找法律途径来处理这个问题.

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英语翻译
（中文是想要表达的意思,翻译不必和中文完全一样）
中文部分：
因为Nancy的行为明显是违法的,所以我认为她还是惧怕法律的.她并没有想到我真的会去寻找法律途径来处理这个问题.因此她才想“ meet with you and someone else to discuss the matter”.但我认为如果我去见她,结果也只会向您所说的那样“ it is simply your word against her word.”不知您是否能够再安排一次电话给Nancy从法律的角度,去讨论这个问题.如果可以将非常的感激.
我的翻译：
I think Nancy still fears the law and she knows exactly that her behavior was illegal.She was surprised that I took legal approach this problem.That's why she wanted to "meet with me and someone else to discuss the matter".But I don't want to see her alone,because the result would be as you mentioned "It is simply my word against her word." It does not make sense.So,in your opinion,is it okay with you to make another phone call to her and discuss the issue based on the law?I'll appreciate it very much if you do so.

Answer 1

您好!

1、fear 最好改用 dread ,有敬畏之意,对法律来说更适合.
2、I took legal approach this problem 建议改为I took legal approach (to solve) this problem更合适一些.
3、But I don't want to see her alone, 是中式英语,不太好.
alone 改成 with myself/by myself/on my own/比较地道,single-handed也可以.

4、So, in your opinion, 这个简直就是机器翻译!
直接改成I think you can make another phone call to her and discuss the issue based on the law.
比刚才好些,但是还是觉得不是特别地道.

5、 I'll appreciate it very much.就好了

6、如果是一封请求别人帮助的信,最好最后加上 Sincerely

恕我直言,楼主是机器翻译之后来问的吧?感觉别扭的很啊!

望采纳!