小弟英文太撇,这是一篇演讲稿自我感觉实在是烂DreamGoodmorning,everyone.MynameisJiangXialin.I’mverygladtostandhereandgiveyouashortspeech.Todaymytopicisdream,Ihopeyouwilllikeitandfoundadreamisimportan

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小弟英文太撇,
这是一篇演讲稿
自我感觉实在是烂
Dream
Good morning,everyone.My name is Jiang Xialin.I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech.Today my topic is dream,I hope you will like it and found a dream is important to your life so that more cherish it.
First,I want to ask you same questions：
Do you have a dream?
Why do you make that dream?
How do you treat your dream?
Dream：
Dream is somebody’s expectation for the future.Dream is somebody’s design for the future on themselves thought.A dream is to a man what wings are to a bird.A life without a dream is like a bird with broken wings.Confined to a cage and oblivious of what lies beyond the range of its vision.On the contrary,a man with a dream is like a warrior armed with ambition,foresight and gallantry,daring to step into an unknown domain to make a journey of adventure.It is dream that is adds fullness,variety and spice to our life and makes it worth living.
However,there is always a gap between dream and reality.we still remembered king’s loudly voice：“I have a dream that one day .”,And from then on,all the Negro fighting for this dream.Although the discrimination has become better than before,Negro have not the really parity with others up to now,this is precisely reality.
At one time,maybe your dream is to study in Tsinghua University or Beijing University,as well you work day and night for this dream.But at last,you have not carried out it successfully,because you have come to Chongqing University.This is the very reality too.From above two examples,we can easily find that there is a gap between the dream and the reality.
Generally speaking,dream overtop reality,in this manner,we will receive buffet from reality.Face to inspect from reality above,what we should do?Someone may discard his dream,someone may change his dream.However,we can not lost sight of following truth.Conversely,if only your dream rooted in the reality,we may find that if the reality reaches the dream easily,following it,what we should pursue?So we should work hard to let the reality to approach dream.More hard we work,more near reality to ours dream.
I say to you,my dear friends,so even though we must face the difficulties of today and tomorrow,we must hold dreams.At last,I will sent you some words：believe you can fly,believe you can take the sky,hard working,you may realize your dreams.
That all,thank you!

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哈哈 想起我的中学时代了,是不是值日报告轮到你了呀?
改后的文章如下：仔细看哪里改了
The Dream
Good morning,everyone.My name is Jiang Xialin.I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech.Today my topic is the dream,I hope you would like it and found a dream is important to you and you will cherish it more.
First,I want to ask you some questions：
Do you have a dream?
Why do you make that dream?
How do you treat your dream?
the dream：
A dream is somebody’s expectation for the future.A dream is somebody's design for the future on themselves' thought.A dream is to a man just as wings to a bird.A life without a dream is like a bird with broken wings.Confined to a cage and oblivious of what lies beyond the range of its vision.On the contrary,a man with a dream is like a warrior armed with ambition,foresight and gallantry,daring to step into an unknown domain to make a journey of adventure.It is dream that is adds fullness,variety and spice to our life and makes it worth living.
However,there is always a gap between dream and reality.we still remembered king’s loudly voice：“I have a dream that one day .”,And from then on,all the Negro fighting for this dream.Although the discrimination has become better than before,Negro have not the really parity with others up to now,this is precisely reality.
At one time,maybe your dream is to study in Tsinghua University or Beijing University,as well you work day and night for this dream.But at last,you have not carried out it successfully,because you have come to Chongqing University.This is the very reality too.From above two examples,we can easily find that there is a gap between the dream and the reality.
Generally speaking,dream overtop reality,in this manner,we will receive buffet from reality.Face to inspect from reality above,what we should do?Someone may discard his dream,someone may change his dream.However,we can not lost sight of following truth.Conversely,if only your dream rooted in the reality,we may find that if the reality reaches the dream easily,following it,what we should pursue?So we should work hard to let the reality to approach dream.More hard we work,more near reality to ours dream.
I say to you,my dear friends,so even though we must face the difficulties of today and tomorrow,we must hold dreams.At last,I will sent you some words：believe you can fly,believe you can take the sky,hard working,you may realize your dreams.
That all,thank you!