我第一次写英语电子邮件,帮我看一看有没有语法和格式上的错误Dearbadradio,(Iforgotyourname,soIusedyouremailname,sorry)ThisisYuxinZhao.YoucancallmeAbbyDoyourememberme?YourChinesefriend!Wemetatthe"sayt

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我第一次写英语电子邮件,帮我看一看有没有语法和格式上的错误
Dear badradio,(I forgot your name,so I used your email name,sorry )
This is Yuxin Zhao.You can call me AbbyDo you remember me?Your Chinese friend!We met at the "say the same thing".This is my new E-mail,Later please use this email writing to me .If you want to better understand China,email me.Keep in touch,I look forward to hearing from you.Abby
现在是改过的，
Dear badradio,(sorry，I forgot your real name,so I used your email name )
This is Yuxin Zhao.You can call me Abby.Do you remember me?One of Your Chinese friends!We met at the "say the same thing".This is my new E-mail address.Please writing to me later.If you want to better understand China,email me，never mind.
Keep in touch，I am looking forward to your early reply.
Your sincerely
Abbey

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顶一下,你写的挺好的.只有很小的错误.下面是帮你改过的.
Dear badradio,(I forgot your name,so I used your email name,sorry )
This is Yuxin Zhao.You can call me Abby.Do you remember me?One of Your Chinese friends!We met at the "say the same thing".This is my new E-mail address.Please use this email from now on.If you want to better understand China,email me.Keep in touch,I look forward to hearing from you.Abby