看看这段要英文有什么不对的地方,最好可以改一下Ingeneral,Chaxiyaisakindgirl.Everywhoseeherthattheyloveherbyall.Herhairisgolden,andshehasblueeyes.She'soutgoing,shelovetodohousework.Shehaveagrandpa,heha

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看看这段要英文有什么不对的地方,最好可以改一下
In general,Chaxiya is a kind girl.Every who see her that they love her by all.
Her hair is golden,and she has blue eyes.She's outgoing,she love to do housework.
She have a grandpa,he has Alzheimer's disease.but she love he and care he every day.
中文意思是——
总得来说,查西亚是个善良的女孩儿,所有见过她的人都喜欢她.
她的头发是金色的,眼睛是蓝色的,她很外向,她喜欢做家务.他有一个外公,他有阿尔茨海默病.但是她很爱他,每天都照顾她.
语法哪里不对,还有后面几句跟白开水似的很没味道,怎么样把它组成复合句,怎么讲才好听呢?

Answer 1

Every who ----------Everyone seeing her all love her
She have a grandpa?谁没有外公?
She has a grandpa suffering with Alzheimer's disease.她有一个患有阿尔茨海默病的外公.
but she love he and care he every day-------------he改为him（作宾语）love等动词注意三单
care 改成 look after 较好
另外Her hair is golden,and she has blue eyes能用上with结构更好
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