请各位大师讲评英语作文,小弟面临中考.话题（网络购物的利与弊）OnlineShoppingIthinktheOnlineShoppingisanewwaytoshopping.OnlineShoppingismoreconvenientthangotothesupermarket.But,thereares

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请各位大师讲评英语作文,小弟面临中考.话题 （网络购物的利与弊）
Online Shopping
I think the Online Shopping is a new way to shopping.Online Shopping is more convenient than go to the supermarket.
But ,there are something bad with it .For example , the goods are not true.And the price is too high.Sometimes if you buy a shirt,you have to wait for a long time.
So,I think the Online Shopping is great.But it also have some weaknesses.

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有几处错误和不妥当的地方,我给你做了修改.如下：                                            ...