这句话怎么改好啊Furthermore,workingexperience,whichgivesmeasolidplatformtoprepareformycareerpursuit,doesgreathelptofurthermyunderstandingofsoftwaresystemsandimprovesmyprofessionalskills,anditmakesmygoalbecomemu

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这句话怎么改好啊
Furthermore,working experience,which gives me a solid platform to prepare for my career pursuit,does great help to further my understanding of software systems and improves my professional skills,and it makes my goal become much clearer
我总觉得and it makes my goal become much clearer这个and it 用的不对,因为前面有一个and了,但是有不知道怎么改好,或者有什么更好的写法?

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那就把 and 改换成 more important,让重要的层次替换明显起来～