今天早上我一醒来就八点半了.又起来晚了.当我醒来的时候我发现宿舍已经没有人了.我赶紧穿好衣服,然后洗脸刷牙,开始新的一天.我每天都对自己说,”简单的生活是幸福的”.我现在很幸福,

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今天早上我一醒来就八点半了.又起来晚了.当我醒来的时候我发现宿舍已经没有人了.我赶紧穿好衣服,然后洗脸刷牙,开始新的一天.我每天都对自己说,”简单的生活是幸福的”.我现在很幸福,因为我有目标.所以我觉得兴奋.因为我每天忙碌着,所以我幸福.
As soon as I wake up,It’s half pass eight.I got up later again.Dormitory was nobody when I wake up.I put on my clothes quickly.Then I wash and rinse.A new days begins.“The simple life is happy” I say to myself every day.I am very happy now.Because I have a goal.So I feel excitement.Because I am busy every day.So I am happy.
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It was half past eight this morning when I woke up.I overslept again!None of my roomates was in our dormitory at the moment.Quickly I put on my clothes,clean up myself and begin my new day.Everyday I ...