在线等----请帮忙看看这短句Mylong-termcareerplanistoutilizemyfinancialknowledgeandexperienceinachallengingpositionofafinancialinstitution.这句话念得通吗?有问题的话,怎么改?

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在线等----请帮忙看看这短句
My long-term career plan is to utilize my financial knowledge and experience in a challenging position of a financial institution.
这句话念得通吗?有问题的话,怎么改?

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in a challenging position of a financial institution 不 太 好 .utilize my financial knowledge 也 不 妥 .知 识 可 以 apply,不 应 该 被utilize.My long-term career plan is to utilize my financial knowled...