求哪位高手帮忙修改一下论文语法错误和病句,大后天就答辩了,我语法水平不行,WhileChineseattachgreatimportanceto"eat",and"hungerbreedsdiscontentment"thisproverbprovesthatwethinkthateatisasimportantasthe

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求哪位高手帮忙修改一下论文语法错误和病句,大后天就答辩了,我语法水平不行,
While Chinese attach greatimportance to "eat",and "hunger breeds discontentment"this proverb proves that we think that eat is as important as the God.Becauseour nation are in the low level of productivity for thousands of years,peoplealways do not have enough to eat,so we pay more attention to eat,I think,itis probably out of a survival needs.If a culture treat the eating as the mostimportant thing,then there will be two phenomena:on the one hand,they willput the food function to acme,not only survive,but also use it to maintainhealth,this is the culture foundation of "medicine is not like to eat’’;on the other hand,the excessive attention to eat,which can make people praisethe pursuit of delicious.Cookery in China,to the almost ultimate pursuit ofdelicious,even the Chinese people living overseas,also live for therestaurant,which became the fundamental foundation of us in the world!Unfortunately,when we put the pursuit of delicious as the first requirement,we ignored the most basic food nutritional value,many of our traditional foodto go through hot fried and long time slow fire cooking,so that thenutritional content of food destruction,many nutrients are lost duringprocessing.As a result of when we talk about nutritional problem,which meansin fact touched the biggest weakness of the Chinese diet culture.A folk sayinggoes:"hunger breeds discontentment,food to taste first"[4]

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Chinese attach great importance to "eating",and "hunger breeds discontentment"this proverb proves that we think that eating is as important as God.Because our nation have been in the low level of productivity for thousands of years,people seldom have enough food to eat,we pay more attention to eating.I think it is probably out of a survival needs.If a culture treats the eating as the most important thing,then there will be two phenomena:on the one hand,they will put the food function to acme,not only to survive,but also use it to maintain health.this is the culture foundation of that "medicine is not liked to eat’’;on the other hand,the excessive attention to eating can make people praise the pursuit of the delicious .Cookery in China is to the almost ultimate pursuit of the delicious,so even the Chinese people living overseas,also live by running restaurants,which has become the fundamental foundation of us in the world!Unfortunately,when we put the pursuit of the delicious as the first requirement,we ignore the most basic food nutritional value,much of our traditional food to go through hot fried and long time slow fire cooking,so that it means destruction of the nutritional contents of food ,and many nutrients are lost during the processing.As a result ,when we talk about nutritional problem,we mean in fact touching the biggest weakness of the Chinese diet culture.A folk saying goes:"hunger breeds discontentment,food to taste first"[4] “民以食为天,食以味为先”
简单地 改动了一下.供参考.