麻烦帮我检查下这个自我介绍有什么语病、和措辞正确与否,是去参加自主招生面试用的,I'mverydelightedtobehere.mynameisxx.Icomefromxx0,whereisabeatifulplace.I'measy-going.Idowellinmystudies.andI

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麻烦帮我检查下这个自我介绍有什么语病、和措辞正确与否,是去参加自主招生面试用的,
I'm very delighted to be here.my name is xx .I come from xx0,where is a beatiful place .I'm easy-going.I do well in my studies .and I always try my best to help others as a （志愿者,汗,）I appreciate you give me this chance .I'll value the chance and show my abilty in the futuru.（最后还需要加个Thank ）

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稍加修改：I'm very delighted to be here.My name is xx .I came from xx0,which is a beatiful place.I'm easy-going.I am doing well in my studies,and I often try my best to help others as a volunteer.I ap...