求批改英文造句1正在自学英语造了几个句子哪位同仁批改一下1.I'vealreadystudyEnglish10years,butuntilnow,Isyillinbeginnerlevel.2.Myfatherandmotherwascutedgrass,allthemorningtaday.3.Whenthetimeisup,can

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求批改 英文造句1
正在自学英语 造了几个句子 哪位同仁批改一下
1.I've already study English 10 years,but until now,I syill in beginner level.
2.My father and mother was cuted grass ,all the morning taday.
3.When the time is up,can you ring me at phone?
4.My aunt lived with her son.
5.I can't repeat that what I (am?) say.
6.I have never send a postcard before 2008()?
7.I always spoil my employees work time.【spoil组词,我总是使我的员工没兴致做工作.】
8.I can't set a fire in the museum.
9.The human doesn't have anything is public,except spirit.【人类没有任何东西是公共的,除了意识.】
10.Actually I am friendly with any one.【实际上我对每一个人都很友好】
谢谢

Answer 1

1.I've already study English 10 years,but until now,I syill in beginner level.
有语法错误,用现在完成时,后面的动词必须是过去分词,study你却用的原形,这样不对,应该是studied,实际上学习是一个永无之境的事情,你已经学了10年的英语了,但是这个学习不会因此终止吧,还会继续下去,因此用现在完成进行时比较好,I've been learning English for 10 years.Learn用于表示学习比较好,study更偏向研究方面的.
beginner 是个名词,初学者的意思,不可以修饰名词level,修饰名词的应该是形容词,初学水平,硬是想这样表达的话也应该是 begining level或者更好是Junior level.
I've been learning English for 10 years,but I am still on junoir level till now.
太多了,第二句动词cut的过去时和过去分词是一样的,cut不能加ed的,哈哈today也拼错了.而且cut是割的意思,你用被动式,翻译就是你爸爸妈妈被割草,哈哈哈,我想应该是:My father and mother was cutting grass all the morning today.
太多了!