我们想推荐王丽为本年度青年奖她乐于助人,经常帮助需要帮助的同学她考虑周到,每件事情计划得很好有一次在上学的路上……如果他能获得此奖,我们将感激不尽.期待收到你的来信

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我们想推荐王丽为本年度青年奖
她乐于助人,经常帮助需要帮助的同学
她考虑周到,每件事情计划得很好
有一次在上学的路上……
如果他能获得此奖,我们将感激不尽.期待收到你的来信

Answer 1

We want to recommend Wang Li the winner of this year's youth awards.She's eager to help people,always renders the help to her classmates in need.What's more,She's so thoughtful that she has everything planned out.
Once on the way to school,it suddenly darkened up and quickly a heavy rain followed.Thanks to her habit of watching the weather forecast,she brought her umbrella before going out.And then she walked past a bookstore,she met her classmates Li Ting,Zhang Ming and me sheltering from the rain in the store doorway.Wang Li came willingly enough and shared her umbrella with us.But the umbrella was too small for four.Thus Wang Li spared no pains to take us to school one after another.Finally we all reached school on time safely.
Her winning the prize would be greatly appreciated.We look forward to your early reply.
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