请人更正下面的英语作文（出错的多发地点应该在时态上~）以下是雅思的一道小作文题目,线形图讲的关于某汉堡包在1998年全年各个月份的销量情况.下面是我写的文章,请高手改错并给出意

Question

请人更正下面的英语作文（出错的多发地点应该在时态上~）
以下是雅思的一道小作文题目,线形图讲的关于某汉堡包在1998年全年各个月份的销量情况.下面是我写的文章,请高手改错并给出意见,
The line graph illustrates the sales of HARRYS humburgers form January to December in the year 1998 .
As we can see from the line graph ,the number of sales fluctuated over the 12 months .More specifically ,at first in January the sales was only 1900 and experienced a slight growth with the number of sales reached nearly 2000 in February .The period from February to June sees a marginal dropped ,but finally the sales rose again from 1700 in May to 1800 in June .
Then ,the sales shot up over the next two months and peaked at 2900 in August .After that ,the sales soon declined rapidly for two months ,bottomed out at just upon 1000 in October .From this point onwards ,the sales experienced a sharp rose again and arrived at 1500 before the Christmas Day in the year 1998 .
Overall ,it can be seen obviously that ,in year 1998 ,August was the best month for HARRYS humburgers sale and October was the worst .

Answer 1

The line graph illustrates the sales of HARRYS humburgers form January to December in the year of 1998 .As we can see from the line graph ,the sales fluctuated over the 12 months .More specifically ,a...