谁能把这段英语润色一下?Supplychainmanagementisasetofapproachesutilizedtoefficientlyintegratesuppliers,manufacturers,warehouses,andstores,sothatmerchandiseisproducedanddistributedattherightquantities,totherightloca

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谁能把这段英语润色一下?
Supply chain management is a set of approaches utilized to efficiently integrate suppliers,manufacturers,warehouses,and stores,so that merchandise is produced and distributed at the right quantities,to the right locations,and at the right time,in order to minimize systemwide costs while satisfying service level requirements.Moreover,transport industry in China has developed rapidly in the last few years and its characteristics and trends are different from those in any other countries.

Answer 1

建议将：in order to minimize systemwide costs while satisfying service level requirements调整为：
so as to minimize systemwide costs and to satisfy service level requirements
建议将those in any other countries.中的“any"去掉.
以上供参考.