关于journal这是我自己写的,外教总说我的journal写的语无伦次,有很多语法错误,我现在很着急,我想通过这个平台,改改,每天写一段,管用吗,希望大家帮我改改,提提意见.AbouttodayOntoday,wedon’tha

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关于journal
这是我自己写的,外教总说我的journal写的语无伦次,有很多语法错误,我现在很着急,我想通过这个平台,改改,每天写一段,管用吗,希望大家帮我改改,提提意见.About today
On today ,we don’t have anything ,but ,I profundity realize I must good good study,if I also at this rate ,then I will lose anything,so,I should be change my all of the habit.because ,the habit decide one person’s fate.

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各种错误,语法错误,拼写错误,用法错误.
Today（On today）,Nothing serious happened,but I profoundly realized that I must study really hard.（we don’t have anything ,but ,I profundity realize I must good good study.）If I still waste my life like this（if I also at this rate） ,then I will lose anything.So,I should change all of my bad habits（I should be change my all of the habit）.Because ,the habits determine one’s fate.（括号内为原文）