英语作文求修改总所周知,烹饪是一种实用的技能,是人类都需要学会的生活技能,在我们的生活中扮演着不可或缺的角色.以前,总是父母做饭给我吃,如果父母实在太忙了没有时间来做饭,我也只

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英语作文求修改
总所周知,烹饪是一种实用的技能,是人类都需要学会的生活技能,在我们的生活中扮演着不可或缺的角色.以前,总是父母做饭给我吃,如果父母实在太忙了没有时间来做饭,我也只好吃快餐.而现在,一想到自己已经是个成年人,应当要承担自己的责任,在父母忙碌工作后为他们做一顿饭.更重要的是,两年后自己还要出国留学,不能够再依赖父母,一定要学会自己独立,才能够在外国更好的学习生活下去.
因此在上个周末,我在母亲的帮助下在家里学会了烹饪.我会继续认真学习烹饪,希望以后能够提高厨艺,能够在外国好好的照顾自己,不让父母担心.
As is known to all,cooking is a practical and useful skill,which is necessary to all of us as well as plays a important role in our lives.In the past,my parents always cook meals for me,but if they are too busy to do that,i had to call for a take-away.But now,i am Already a adult and i am supposed to take responsibility for myself.After my parents' busy work,i want to cook meals for them.What's more,I will go to foreign countries for further study,so i could not depends on my parents anymore and i should learn how to live on my own.Only in this way can i study and live better in the foreign countries. Consequently,with the help of my mather,i have learned to cook meals at home on last weekends.I will keep studying cooking hard and i wish i could improve the cooking skills.If i could do that,i will take good care of myself and Reassure my parents.

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