某英文报社正在举行我难忘的一次经历主题征文比赛.请你以Anunforgettableexperience为题,用英语写篇作文,次数100左右.ActivityagroupsingingcompetitionPreparation.ResultwinthefirstprizeYourfeelingse.g.No

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某英文报社正在举行 我难忘的一次经历 主题征文比赛.请你以An unforgettable experience为题,用英语写篇
作文,次数100左右.
Activity a group singing competition
Preparation .
Result win the first prize
Your feelings e.g.No pains,no gains.
短文须包括上述要点,可适当增加细节.文中不能出现真实人名,校名
我作文写的差.哪位能帮我写下.不用写的很好.求.
开头为：During the past year ai high school,I have had many unforgettable experiences.One of them was

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During the past year in high school,I have had many unforgettable experiences.One of them was taken part in the activity of a group singing competition held at my school.My group was very large,so we needed a lot of preparations before we were ready for the actual singing was taken place.To our surprises,at the end of competition,we came first.What wonderful result that was!I was really over the moon.Although that was a very hard work,no pain no gain,I think it was well worth the efforts.Afterwards,all of us in the group went out to celebrate.We ate at the McDonald's.I had a double cheese burger meal.Then we all went home very joyfully.
刚好大约一百词,你认为还可以吗?