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这句话存在什么问题吗?看出来的请指出来.Thepaperfocusonthecomprehensivemanagementsystemoflogisticsinformationflowandincomeflow,whichisbasedonthewholelifecycleoftelecomcard,ratherthantheordinarystock-sell-st

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这句话存在什么问题吗?看出来的请指出来.
The paper focus on the comprehensive management system of logistics information flow and income flow,which is based on the whole life cycle of telecom card,rather than the ordinary stock-sell-storage system.
电信卡,是 telecom card 还是cards?
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1.focus -> focuses
2.which is -> take away
3.stock-sell-storage system -> this is confusing