老师请您帮我看看这段话我写的有没有问题.IknowthatonlywhenImyselfhavemoreknowledgethatIcancontributemoretotheprogramme,thereforeIamworkinghardwithmyEnglish,andI’vebookedtwoIELTStestsonJanuaryandMarch,

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老师请您帮我看看这段话我写的有没有问题.
I know that only when I myself have more knowledge that Ican contribute more to the programme,therefore I am working hard with myEnglish,and I’ve booked two IELTS tests on January and March,hoping toachieve satisfactory results.I will send you my IELTS scores as soon as I havethem.

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I know that only when I myself have more knowledge CAN I contribute more to the programme, therefore I am working hard with myEnglish, and I’ve booked two IELTS tests for January and March, hoping to...