关于朋友变换的英语作文给一个具体参考大概是个叫Lily的女孩以前直头发害羞文静不喜欢英语喜欢唱歌现在个子高短卷发喜欢英语喜欢锻炼写法就是她以前怎么样现在怎么样就这样

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关于朋友变换的英语作文
给一个具体参考
大概是个叫Lily的女孩 以前直头发 害羞 文静 不喜欢英语 喜欢唱歌
现在个子高 短卷发 喜欢英语 喜欢锻炼
写法就是她以前怎么样 现在怎么样 就这样来回 我不太会用衔接的句子 写下来的作文不大流畅 具体请给出作文 最好有这类作文的具体衔接句子的用法!
不是...我自己会写具体内容 就是衔接起来有些别扭 所以主要问的是衔接 ..因为老是用一两个说法太单调 而且肯定得不了高分

Answer 1

以前和现在的话不是用 however, whereas, but,on the other hand 的哦
我写下来了 供你参考下：
There's been a girl called Lily, she changes a lot recently,comparing now and before (或now and then) .
Before (或 some time ago) she's a shy and quiet person, with long straight hair and she doesnt like English that much but at that time she likes singing.
(By the time when i see her again) 或用 Lately i saw her and she changed a lot! She's getting much taller with long wavy(curly) hair,and becoming more outgoing because she likes sports and also interests in English now.
如果直接说 “she WAS shy, however she likes exercise now; she had long hair, now with curly hair"
如果想句子自然点 就用个 “但这次/最近(要多充字数的话也写上在哪儿)见到她：But when i saw her this time in a friend's birthday party, i was so suprised because, she USED TO BE so shy and now i cant believe she actually likes sports!” 这样连起来会好些吧 =D