请帮忙看看有没有错误,1、IwastoldthatyouliketravelingandyoucametoGuangzhouinperson.Ibelievethatyouhavelotsofadventurestories.Couldyoutellusonofthem?2、Ialwaysdreamaboutmyfateinthefuture.Iwanttogoabroa

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请帮忙看看有没有错误,
1、I was told that you like traveling and you came to Guangzhou in person.I believe that you have lots of adventure stories.Could you tell us on of them?
2、I always dream about my fate in the future.I want to go abroad to study as soon as it’s time for me to go to college.But I’m worried my speaking.A teacher from Beijing told me to practice speaking on my own.But that’s very bored.We have much less chance to practice it than the students in some where developed .I don’t know what to do now.Please give me some advice.Thank you!
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1、I was told that you like traveling and you came to(came to改为has been to) Guangzhou in person(in person表示亲自,亲力亲为,言重了,可以省去).I believe that you have lots of adventure stories.Could yo...