请帮我把这个paragraph改的更生动,但是本来的意思不要丢失了.Next,listentomusichelpsourbody.Itstimulatehuman'srightbrainandmakepsychologicaladjustment.Musicstimulatesthebrain,especiallyclassicalmusic.Itisveryhe

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请帮我把这个paragraph改的更生动,但是本来的意思不要丢失了.
Next,listen to music helps our body.
It stimulate human's right brain and make psychological adjustment.
Music stimulates the brain,especially classical music.
It is very helpful on the training and the development of right brain.
Music stimulates brain,activation of brain cells,and the appropriate music to stimulate the activity helps brain and prevents aging.
Psychologically,music helps the brain adjust to the situation.
Music alleviates depression,and treats some heart conditions,and lets the body relax.
Good music can relive stress and other diseases.For health,listen to music is a good choice.
就是读起来的时候重复的单词不要这么多,尽量 be 动词可以减少和变成Action verb.

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Not only the melody can mentally help,but also it can physically help us.when we are enjoying to the various musics especially for classical musics,our right brain will be stimulated by these songs and make several psychological adjustments.These changes will activate our brain cells.Furthermore,it can even prevent aging
There are several psychological aspects as well.First of all,music can help our brain relax.When we are listening to the music,we are relaxed so that our heart conditions will be totally improved; consequently,we can think positively and calmly,and will decrease the possibility of disease
In conclusion,listening to music is an advisable choice
亲,我不小心把你的整段段落给改了哈,不过中心真心没变,我加了些副词还有改变一些句子的结构,不要生气哈