初学英语,每周一篇书面表达．请求改错!11Asastudenti'malwaysconversationwithteachers.Butourtalkedabuutallofstudy.Iseldomtalkedaboutlifeanddreamwithhim.Becauseidon'twanttotalkthistopicwithanybodyexceptmyf

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初学英语,每周一篇书面表达．请求改错!11
As a student i'm always conversation with teachers.But our talked abuut all of study.I seldom talked about life and dream with him.Because i don't want to talk this topic with anybody except my futures lover.
I think good Teacher-student reationship is kinds and harmonys.
When a student had any trouble.They believe the teaher and found helps to them .And theachers can understand students when them making mistake.Find a good ways to solve trouble.If the teachers never standed in students way to think about,only to blame them.Student would not believe teachers.
Building a good Teacher-student reationship.I think teachers and student will trust each other.Become a friend.Do the best to study!Like a term.Made a success and achievements in study!
This is my option.
错误很多,希望大家不吝教诲.
初学者献丑了,真报歉............

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As a student i'm always conversation with teachers.
（没有那种说法,改为i always make a conversation with teachers)
But our talked abuut all of study.（1,和前一句没有转折关系怎么可以用But,应该用And,我知道你是和后一句有转折关系,那应该加在后一句上面.2,主语应该是we,而不是our）
I seldom talked about life and dream with him.Because i don't want to talk this topic with anybody except my futures lover.(future lover就可以了,不要‘s)
I think good Teacher-student reationship is kinds and harmonys.(形容词后面可以加S?）
When a student had any trouble.They believe the teaher and found helps to them .（一个句子,用they,不要大写.然后后面半句我真没看懂,是说学生相信老师会帮助他们?the teacher can help them)
And theachers can understand students when them making mistake.
Find a good ways to solve trouble.(主语是用they,不是them,细心一点,然后是make.find前加And和前一个句子连起来,单独的话句子有点混乱）
If the teachers never standed in students way to think about,only to blame them.Student would not believe teachers.（stand不要过去式）
Building a good Teacher-student reationship.I think teachers and student will trust each other.（will最好用should)
Become a friend.
Do the best to study!Like a term.Made a success and achievements in study!(前面用了冠词A,后面怎么还能用achievements呢）
This is my option.(opinion,不是option)
差不多就这样把
其他还有一些问题,实在太多了,我就不指出了