我要写封信给一家外资企业,帮我改下,在上个礼拜五与您愉快的交谈后,我很急切的等待着您的回应.我很希望到贵公司来工作,如果您也觉得我是合适的人选,afterahappyconversationwithyouonlastFr

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我要写封信给一家外资企业,帮我改下,
在上个礼拜五与您愉快的交谈后,我很急切的等待着您的回应.我很希望到贵公司来工作,如果您也觉得我是合适的人选,
after a happy conversation with you on last Friday,I'm very urgent to get your response.I hoped very much to work in your firm.If you also thought that I am the appropriate people,please as soon as possible tell me.

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After the nice conversation with you last Friday,I am waiting for good news from you eagerly.I am realy looking forward to join your company,please inform me immediately if I am lucky to be the right person.Thanks a lot.