英语翻译刚刚自己写的这段自我介绍,也不知道有没有错...英语资深者可指导一下...我主要想看看作为别人看到这段话的样子...Hi,IamaChinesegirl.LeaveamessagetohopetomakeanEnglishpartnerherefort

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刚刚自己写的这段自我介绍,也不知道有没有错...英语资深者可指导一下...
我主要想看看作为别人看到这段话的样子...
Hi,I am a Chinese girl.Leave a message to hope to make an English partner here for the first time.If you interested in Chinese,we can become friends because I am very confident to Chinese.My English is not very good and I want to raise my English.It helps each other to be very kind really like this,is that right?In addition,I love music very much and I have played the piano until now since six years old.
I am a lively girl and I have lots of dreams.If you think we can be friends,contact me with MSN.

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我是一个中国女孩.作出一个留言,希望能在这里的英语合作伙伴的第一时间来这里.如果您对中国感兴趣,我们可以成为朋友,因为我对汉语非常有信心.我的英文不是很好,我想提高我的英文.它对各方面帮助都是很好的,真的很喜欢这个,是吗?此外,我非常热爱音乐,我弹钢琴,直至现在,因为6岁.
我是一个活泼的女孩,我有很多梦想.如果您认为我们可以成为朋友,和我用MSN联系