高中书面表达.求改错.写封感写信给DAVID,表达对他邀请你参加生日PARTY的感谢和对他的祝福.DearDavid:I'mgladtoattendyourbirthdaypartylastnight.Iwanttoexpressmyhappinessandthanksforyou.Hereareafewfellin

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高中书面表达.求改错.
写封感写信给DAVID,表达对他邀请你参加生日PARTY的感谢和对他的祝福.
Dear David:
I'm glad to attend your birthdayparty last night.I want to express my happiness and thanks for you.
Here are a few fellings.First,dinner and birthcake was very tasty.We all like it.Then your entertained and program also were quite excellent.We were all cheerful to attend the parties.
I believe,in the new year,your study and examination will be better.Our basketball team will win the school tournament champion in this season.Beside,affter college entrance examination,we can travel to coast in summer holiday.They will be excited and unforgettable.
However,study is important things in now.
Best wishes.
Yours truly
.

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1,I want to express my happiness and thanks for you.中for改为to
2,First,dinner and birthcake was very tasty.was改成were
3,We all like it.it改为them
4,your entertained改为entertainment
5,They will be excited and unforgettable.they改成these,excited改为exciting
6,study is important things in now改为study is the most important things now
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