请帮我改一篇高中英语作文谢谢TomisamanwhoserealnameisW.D.Tom.HeisanovelistofUSA.Andhewasbornin1881inthewestofAmerica,then,asanovelist,hediedintheyearof1940.Whenhewasyoung,heworkedinbanks.Unlucky,hew

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请帮我改一篇高中英语作文谢谢 Tom is a man whose real name is W.D.Tom.He is a novelist of USA.And he was born in 1881 in the west of America,then,as a novelist,he died in the year of 1940.When he was young,he worked in banks.Unlucky,he was in the prison for 3 years at his thirtys.During this time,he created novels.At last,no sooner had he got out of the prison than he have became famous.He wrote more than 300 novels in his life,several of them are translated into chinese,being loved by chinese readers.

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这里貌似不能这样用哦.因为他变的famous不是行为动词呢.而且no sooner than当中是要有条件的.不能三个单词放一起吧.比如no sooner had I put down the phone Thansk it rang again.