Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Encouragementbringsmepower．"（根据所给情景，请以"鼓励带给我力量"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）．（注意：短文中

Question

Write a passage of at least 60words about the topic"Encouragement brings me power．"（根
据所给情景，请以"鼓励带给我力量"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）．
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）．

Situation：In our daily life，we need lots of encouragement from our teachers，parents or friends．Please use one or two examples to show us your opinion on this topic and give your reason（s．．
（日常生活中我们需要来自多方的鼓励．请你举1-2个例子阐述你的观点，并说明理由）．

The following words and phrases are for your reference only．（下列词语仅供参考）

difficulties          deal with        disappointed
achievements        manage        powerful

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Answer 1

Life is full of difficulties and the best way to fight against them is to stick to them．But we can't always go through these problems ourselves，so we need to gain encouragement from others．（日常生活中我们需要来自多方的鼓励）
Once I made a speech in front of the students from different schools．I tried hard to say out every word clearly and correctly．Unfortunately，I was so nervous that I forgot one part of my speech．【高分句型】I felt disappointed and almost wanted to give up．"You are great．"Someone shouted．Others then started to cheer me up．I suddenly became powerful and completed the speech perfectly．（一个事例）
From that time，I have realized that we do need encouragement from teachers，parents or even straigers，because it will give us much power to achieve our dreams．【高分句型】（感想）