下面这句的“him”和“his”可以用人名替换吗?Itisthisspiritofperseveringexplorationthatmakeshimsurpasshimselfagainandagainandbringhisartofpaintingtothedepthofhistorycontinuouslysothatitisconnectedwithth

Question

下面这句的“him”和“his”可以用人名替换吗?
It is this spirit of persevering exploration that makes him surpass himself again and again and bring his art of painting to the
depth of history continuously so that it is connected with the larger cultural background afterwards.
改为：
It is this spirit of persevering exploration that makes Pan Tianshou （潘天寿） surpass himself again and again and bring Pan Tianshou's art of painting to the
depth of history continuously so that it is connected with the larger cultural background afterwards.
这样改对吗?
改了两个地方，Pan Tianshou 代替“him”Tianshou's art 代替“his”，
请问这个长句，中文的确切意思是什么？

Answer 1

可以改的啊,而且如果没有上下文的话,第一个用人名反而更清楚.
第二个改掉语法没有错,但是显得重复啰嗦,因为第一处出现人名了,所以这里用his较好.
翻译：正是这种不断探索的精神,使得潘天寿一次又一次的超越自己,并不断的在自己的绘画作品中融入深刻的历史印记,以至于后来,他的作品被和更宽泛的文化背景相联系起来.
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