请各位英语高手看下我说的这些话对吗?“hello!Iamthecleanerofyourhouse,Fromnowoniwillbegintocleanyourhouseinsteadofjane,Janehasquitedthisjob,ihavealreadydonesevenweeksinyourhome.fromtoday,ifyouhaveanyth

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请各位英语高手看下我说的这些话对吗?
“hello!Iam the cleaner of your house,From now on i will begin to clean your house instead of jane,Jane has quited this job,i have already done seven weeks in your home.from today,if you have anything problems or anything you want to tell me ,please call me~thank you!my phone number is."
我想说的是“你好,我是你现在的家庭清洁者,从现在开始我开始做你家的清洁取代简,她不做了,我已经做了7个星期了在你的家,从今天开始,如果你有任何问题或有什么事情想告诉我,请打电话给我,”请问我说的英语对吗?：）

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可以.如果要完美一些可以把please call me 放在if 句前；并且problem用单数.