英语作文Mydream语法写对吗,Aseveryoneknows,Everyonehasadream,Somepeople'sdreamisgreatorissmaller.Mydreamistobeauniveristyman.Iknowthatitisnoeasycomingtrue,Butitisimportantforustobeauniveristyman,Atfirs

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英语作文My dream 语法写对吗,
As everyone knows ,Everyone has a dream,Some people's dream is great or is smaller.My dream is to be a univeristy man.I know that it is no easy coming true,But it is important for us to be a univeristy man,At first you must has a lot of knowledge,the second you must pass exam,the third your mind must clean,I know My knowledge no enough,But I always study hard.For my dream I must beat difficulty and study hard.I know only hard my dream should come true .

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你好,现在将你的作文修改如下,请仔细对照不同之处（句式,单词,标点符号）
As is known to all [As we know], everyone has a dream. Some people have a big dream and some have a small dream. My dream is to go to university. I know that it is not easy to realize it (to make it come true), but it is very important for us to attend university [go to university].
First, I must have a lot of knowledge. Second, I must pass all exams. Last, I must keep my mind clean [must clean my mind].
I know that my knowldege is not enough now but I will keep learning. I will solve all difficulties and work hard to make my dream come true.
什么是universtiy man?大学生university student 大学老师university teacher. 上大学go to/attend unviersity
保持头脑clean是什么东东,上大学跟这个没关系吧
实现梦想realize my dream;梦想成真my dream comes true
你的最后一段太啰嗦了
PS 你的梦想就是读大学吗?你的梦想可以bigger!