把这句话改成长句子Master’sTournament.Hesurprisedalltheveterans.Hewas22atthetime.(longsentence)我是这样改的TigerWoodsisthenameofayoungAmericangolferwhosetarecordinthe1997Master’sTournamentandsurpris

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把这句话改成长句子Master’s Tournament. He surprised all the veterans. He was 22 at the time. (long sentence)
我是这样改的Tiger Woods is the name of a young American golfer who set a record in the 1997 Master’s Tournament and surprised all the veterans at an age of 22.
答案是Tiger Woods, a young American golfer, surprised all the veterans when he set a record in the 1997 at the age of 22.
我想知道我改的那个是不是长句子呀,对不对?

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Tiger Woods is the name of a young American golfer who set a record in the 1997 Master’s Tournament and surprised all the veterans at an age of 22.
你的句子有几点不太好,the name of 去掉,最后的an 改为the 就对了,在中文当中可以解释成这是一个人的名字,可是英文当中不需要太多的累赘,你的句子也是长句子,改动下也算对的.