高手你还在吗？Ifoundareferencebookinabookstorenearourschool。ThebookwasjustwhatIwasbadlyinneedfor；However，itwastoocheap.theowneroftheshopcouldonlygivemethediscountof10percent。Mydeskmate'ssuggestio

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I found a reference book in a bookstore near our school。
The book was just what I was badly in need for；However，
it was too cheap. the owner of the shop could only give
me the discount of10 per cent。My deskmate's suggestion
was that I bought one online. He said goods online were
usually much cheaper.Following his advice , I surfed on
the internet. and to my great delight, the book offered
at half price online。I immediately purchased it online
ithout hesitations.Thanks to my deskmate, I saved sbout
40 yuan,with that I treated jim to a meal the other day.

Answer 1

1. 第二个a改成the
2. for改成of
3. cheap改成expensive
4. the改成a
5. bought改成buy
6. 去掉on
7. book和offered中间加上was
8. half和price中间加入the
9. hesitations改成hesitation
10. that改成which
不能保证答案绝对准确，因为楼主标点符号和首字母大小写没有标清，这对改错的判断有不小的影响。