Iworkatahealthstation.IfindwhatIhaveoneshortcominginmycharacter.Ioftenobeyedmylleader'sorder.butinmyheart,Ioftenfeeltheseordersareunfair,Healwaysordersmewithawaythathewouldnotdaretouseitwiththeotherpeople

Question

I work at a health station.I find what I have one shortcoming in my character.I often obeyed my l
leader's order.but in my heart,I often feel these orders are unfair,He always orders me with a way that he would not dare to use it with the other people in the office,because if they did ,they would delay their work.But I just not dare to go against his will.What's shall I do?Should I change my job and leave my boss?Or should change my character and say no to him?短文改错

Answer 1

I work at a health station.I find what（what 改为“that) I have one shortcoming in my character.（词句很中式,可改为I find that there is something lacking in my character.) I often obeyed my leader's order(复数形式order）.but in my heart,（but in my heart 直接用But in fact)I often feel (feel 改为think）these orders are unfair.He always orders me with（with 改为in) a way that he would not dare to use it with the other people in the office.because(Because)if they did (they did 改为my leaders treat them like that),they would delay(这里是拒绝的意思,最好用refuse） their work.But I just not dare to go against his will.（改为Unluckly,I'm the one who won't go against their willings.) What's （改为What)shall I do?Should I change my job and leave my boss?Or should （去掉should）change my character and say no to him?