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Winter solstice is a very important solar term in Chinese Lunar calendar.
Early during the spring and autumn period,2500 odd years from now,Winter solstice was first determined as the Chinese traditional solar term（节气） among the total 24 terms.
Midwinter day is the very day in North hemisphere（半球） with the shortest day and longest night year-round.After it,daytime will become increasingly longer and the coldest clime will invade（入侵） all the places on the Northern part of the globe.We Chinese always call it "JinJiu",which means once Winter solstice comes,we will meet the coldest time ahead.
This celebration of winter solstice can be traced to the Chinese belief in yin and yang,which represent balance and harmony in life.It is believed that the yin qualities of darkness and cold are at their most powerful at this time,but it is also the turning point,giving way to the light and warmth of yang.For this reason,the Dong Zhi Festival is a time for optimism.
Ancient china did pay great attention to this holiday,regarding it as a big event.There was the saying that "Winter solstice holiday is greater than the spring festival".Nowadays,many regions still celebrate it as a big holiday.
Winter solstice is celebrated in style.The coming of winter is celebrated by families and is traditionally the time when farmers and fishermen gather food in preparation for the coming cold season.It is also a time for family reunions.
Northerners may have dumplings that day while southerners may have rice and long noodles.Some places even have the tradition to offer sacrifices to the heaven and earth.
The longest night of the year is a time to put on brand new clothes,visit family with gifts and to laugh and drink deep into the long night.

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Winter solstice is a very important solar term in Chinese Lunar calendar.
Early during the spring and autumn period(这句话什么意思?指代不清),2500 odd years from now,Winter solstice was （加The）first determined as the Chinese traditional solar term among the total 24 terms.
Midwinter day is the very （very改为right）day in North hemisphere with the shortest day and longest night year-round.After it,daytime will become increasingly （become和increasingly择一--建议去掉become）longer and the coldest clime （改为air）will invade（入侵） all the places on the Northern part of the globe（改为earth）.We Chinese always call it "JinJiu",which means once Winter solstice comes,we will meet the coldest time ahead.
This celebration of winter solstice can be traced to the （加old修饰一下吧）Chinese belief in （改为of）yin and yang,which represent balance and harmony in life.It is believed that the yin qulitities（改为appear as） darkness and cold（加,）（加It is） are（去掉are
at their） most powerful at this time,but it is also the turning point,giving way to the light and warmth of yang.For this reason,the Dong Zhi Festival（改为Winter solstice Festival） is a time for （用of）optimism.
Ancient china did pay great attention to this holiday（你上文用的是festival啊,怎么变了）,regarding it as a big event.There was the saying that "Winter solstice holiday is greater than the spring festival".Nowadays,many regions still celebrate it as a big holiday（festival）.
Winter solstice is celebrated in style.The coming of winter is celebrated by families and（去掉and 加,
） （加it）is traditionally the time when farmers and fishermen gather （加their）food in preparation for （用of）the coming cold season.It is also a time for family reunions.
Northerners （用The people in north China）may have dumplings that day while southerners （用The people in southth China）may have rice and long noodles.Some places even have the tradition to（用of） offer（加ing） sacrifices to the heaven and earth.
The longest night of the year is a time to put （putting）on brand（去掉brand） new clothes,visit（加ing） family（friend） with gifts（加,）
and （去掉and 加you can also）to（去掉to） laugh and drink deep into the long night.