作业里有一个写房东证明的，我不知道这样写有没错~DearSir/Madam:Thankyoufortakingtimetoreadthisletter.MynameisAma,IamJim'sLandlord.OnOctober1st,2008,JimandKatahavereachedandagreementwithme,toconcludethe

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作业里有一个写房东证明的，我不知道这样写有没错~
Dear Sir/Madam:
Thank you for taking time to read this letter.My name is Ama,I am Jim's Landlord.On October 1st,2008,Jim and Kata have reached and agreement with me,to conclude the lease contract.From October 1st,2008,they have been living in __________________till now.If your have any question,please contact me.My number is______________.
Sincerely,
Ama Wong

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Dear Sir/Madam:
My name is Ama.I am Jim's Landlord.On October 1st,2008,Jim and Kata concluded the lease contract with me.They have been living in __________________since October 1st,2008 till now.If your have any question,please contact me.My number is______________.
Sincerely,
Ama Wong
我调整了一下顺序,个人觉得这么写比较好,另外修改了一些语法小错误,希望能帮到,