英语语法问题Hi,mynameisDale,Iwasashyboy,Iwanttobeahacker,becausehewasexciting,IamfullyconfidentthatIwillwinbecauseIhaveasecretweapon,ismycomputer.MybirthdayisMarch17,Ihopesomeonecanonmybirthdayto

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英语语法问题
Hi, my name is Dale, I was a shy boy, I want to be a hacker, because he was exciting, I am fully confident that I will win because I have a secret weapon, is my computer. My birthday is March 17, I hope someone can on my birthday to my birthday party, from now on I am going to conquer English, I hope my English better! last, I wish you all with the children's day! 通顺不,翻译过来是什么

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大家好,我名字叫Dale,我是一个害羞的男孩子,我想做一名黑客,因为这样很刺激.我有充足的信心我会赢因为我有一个秘密武器——我的电脑.我生日是5月17,我希望有人能出席我的生日派对,从现在开始我要征服英语,我希望我的英语能学的更好!最后,祝你们六一快乐!
有几处不通顺 because it was exciting
it is my computer
My birthday is on March 17
I hope someone can get to my birthday party on my birthday
I hope my English will be better
At last, I wish you all happy on Children's Day!