谁能帮我挑错误,[英文]Dear***:Hi!Name:Kai***,Xiao.Age:11.27.1**5Height:1**cmWeight:**kgEducationalHistory:01-06***PrimarySchool[***,Shenzhen,China]07-now,**MiddleSchool[***,Shenzhen,China]Hobby:Computer,Read

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谁能帮我挑错误,[英文]
Dear ***:
Hi!
Name:Kai***,Xiao.
Age:11.27.1**5
Height:1**cm
Weight:**kg
Educational History:
01-06***PrimarySchool [***,Shenzhen,China]
07-now,**MiddleSchool [***,Shenzhen,China]

Hobby:Computer,Read book,Singing.

Tel:[phone]****68

Address:602.HaiTianChamber.,ShenZhen.GuangDong,China.

Postalcode:518000

Answer 1

Dear ***:
Hi!
Name:Kai***,Xiao.
Age:11.27.1**5
Height:1**cm
Weight:**kg
(Education) History:
01-06***PrimarySchool [***,Shenzhen,China]
07-(present),**MiddleSchool [***,Shenzhen,China]
Hobby:Computer,Read book,Singing.
Tel:[phone]****68
Address:602.HaiTianChamber.,ShenZhen.GuangDong,China.
(Post code):518000
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