英语口试,帮我看看这段文章有没有错误..Iwasalongholiday.OnMonday,Iwenttoapark.OnTuesday,Ididmyhomework..OnWednesday,IwatchedTV.OnThursday,Iplayedcomputergames.OnFridayIclimbedamountarn.OnSaturdayIwentskii

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英语口试 ,帮我看看这段文章有没有错误..
I was a long holiday.On Monday,I went to a park .On Tuesday,I did my homework..On Wednesday,I watched TV.On Thursday,I played computer games.On Friday I climbed a mountarn.On Saturday I went skiing.On Sunday I saw elephants.Every day I had fun.有错误请帮我指出 ,还有,最后一句可以怎样结尾 .

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I was（on/ having） a long holiday. On Monday, I went to a park .On Tuesday,I did my homework. On Wednesday, I watched TV. On Thursday, I played computer games. On Friday I climbed a mountarn(mountain). On Saturday I went skiing. On Sunday I saw(the) elephants. Every day I had fun.(I enjoyed my holidays very much.) 括号内为修改建议.